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What do you think of my web site?,

Post by vivi_o7 on Tue May 29, 2012 2:44 pm

I used webs.com, please be gentle, but any suggestion is very welcome!! What a Face

www.fancydesigns.webs.com
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Re: What do you think of my web site?,

Post by debranewmanart on Tue May 29, 2012 2:48 pm

Well, it's more than I have lol!

Personally, I'd be less inclined to stop at a brown page to investigate further. How about some color! Also, some of the pics are pretty blurry. I'd only use your very best pics even if that means there aren't very many.

Other than that, pretty good for a start.

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Re: What do you think of my web site?,

Post by fesspenter on Tue May 29, 2012 3:26 pm

Dear vivi_o7:
I have no qualms about your achromatic color scheme on your first page (coming from someone who has an all black background on her website). I just have a few nitpicky suggestions and typo corrections:

You have:
Let us help you to built the best memories in your next party or event. Face paint is the best way to guaranteed a moment of fun for kids and adults.
We are committed to provide a professional service, only using high quality FDA approved cosmetic grade face paint and glitter as well, easily washable with water.

I suggest:
Let us help you build the best memories at your next party or event. Face paint is the best way to guarantee a moment of fun for kids and adults.
We are committed to provide a professional service, using only high quality FDA approved cosmetic grade face paint and glitter as well, easily washable with soap and water.

Nice work, by the way.
I just face painted on Sunday, and one little girl looked in the mirror and noticed that I swooped a curly line UP, instead of DOWN on her mask. She didn't match the picture on the board EXACTLY. Her Mum talked her through the logic that "The face painter tailored the paint job just for YOU. You have a smaller forehead than the girl in the picture". At that moment, I was WISHING for fuzzier pictures.
Just my two cents worth.
Nice work in your gallery, by the way!
xoxo


Last edited by fesspenter on Tue May 29, 2012 3:29 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Misplaced a ,comma...and it bugged me.)
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Re: What do you think of my web site?,

Post by vivi_o7 on Tue May 29, 2012 5:08 pm

shame on me!! Embarassed , Thanks so much Lisa, English is may second lenguage, and I try hard with my spelling, but like you see I must be the cause of an eye burning to some people, very nice story about the little girl, we need more mums like she at the gigs!! jaja thanks for the coments lol!
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Re: What do you think of my web site?,

Post by Kalina on Tue Jul 17, 2012 7:51 pm

I was unable to see the webpage for some reason.

I tell all the kids I paint that the designs on my board are similar to what they will get as each design I do is different and special for that child and I challenge them to spot the differences! This keeps them happy and makes them feel kinda special too!

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Re: What do you think of my web site?,

Post by Lady Jayde on Fri Nov 09, 2012 11:33 am

Um, I think this needs to be moved. This is the upcoming events section.
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