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Post by Lisa Lotek on Mon Jun 15, 2015 1:46 pm

Hey guys,

So I feel like I've finally got enough images and information for my website and would like your honest opinion. It is still in the works.

Feel free to comment on the colors, look of the website, navigation, usefullness, or if it is just plain awful.

I barely get any traffic to my website, so I'm just trying to figure out what I can do to change that.

Thanks!!!!
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Post by LittleMonsters on Tue Jun 16, 2015 1:41 am

I really like your website! Lots of info, lots of great pictures, easy enough to navigate - nice work! Smile
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Re: Website - Honest opnion

Post by jlirie on Tue Jun 16, 2015 8:21 pm

nice clean dramatic look with the black background and gold and white lettering, and the turquoise for variety!

suggest putting your contact info more prominently at top of home page in large font. people who already know you or have heard about you won't have to scroll down to look for it.

also suggest making photos on each page the same large size. right now home page and airbrush photos are small. do you have photos of the other services you mention? (btw, the henna baby bump design is gorgeous).

the drop down menu titles are grey and get lost against the black background, maybe make them gold, like titles on the pages?

have someone with webpage tech experience proof it for compatibility on a smartphone -

on my smartphone, the words "face painting" overlap with the words of the intro on the homepage.  

similar thing on the face painting page, the end of the first sentence overlaps the second sentence.

on the airbrush page, the word "info" runs off the right side of the screen.

on stilt walking page, need a space between "ofcourse".


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Re: Website - Honest opnion

Post by Lisa Lotek on Tue Jun 16, 2015 8:40 pm

jlirie,

Thank you so much for your helpful hints.
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Re: Website - Honest opnion

Post by jlirie on Tue Jun 16, 2015 8:54 pm

i tend to be a perfectionist proofreader, just want you to look fabulous Smile. there are some more typos i saw, maybe go through each page and check for spaces needed, and wording.
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Post by Flying Laughter on Wed Jun 17, 2015 8:34 pm

I would say, from a graphic designer point of view, I would limit your font selections to 2 to 3 max. Other than that, it is a very nice site. Smile
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Post by jlirie on Sat Jun 20, 2015 3:20 pm

hey, your website is looking pretty spiffy, got the technical glitches fixed and the drop down menu is easy to see.

you guys do great work, from the pics you have up, i'm guessing you'll be busy Smile
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