Check out my website let me know what you think

http://www.wix.com/delightfulcreations/byruth

Thanks, Ruth

its looking good!!! love your cakes!!! they look so yummy!!!

I think it's adorable. I love the simplicity that really brings all the attention to the photos.

Looks nice! The blue is a little hard to see on the black background. There is a typo at the bottom of the home page "balooon" rather than "balloon". I would suggest putting your contact info on every page with a short blurb saying "call to book me for your party" or something similar.

Overall - great site! I love your cakes! I just made my first fondant cake the other day, and yeesh... it took HOURS! Won't be attempting it again anytime soon, rofl... I admire those who have a gift for it.

Wow your pics look really great!

I like. Very clear and to the point. I think there may be a grammar error in the bio section.

Looks good! Those cakes are awesome! I do agree with what Angie said. You might want to put a picture of one of your cakes on the front page too.

Thaks guys for all the comments, I will fix the errors soon..

@CABBYJ I agree I have to fix the bio info just have to figure out how to word it correctly...english is my second language and was my worst class in school lol

@Angie, cakes its nice to be able to do them for the fam...but at this point it's sooo much work, that I've really thought about not doing them at all (unless if for my fam). I live in a low income area and people really dont have the money to pay for those types of cakes.

Ruth,
Do you live near a more affluent area? Maybe you could market to them?

The blue is really hard to read and the "delightful creations" is nice, but really big! i had to adjust my eyes and scoot back in my chair to read it. Also, try using a non-cursive font for the meat and potatos of your website. You want the readers to be able to glance and understand what they are reading. Most people spend 10-20 seconds on a webpage before clicking another page. For the contact page, are you able to create an online form they can submit to your email? it would make sure that all the info you needed would be included in the email. The gallery looks great! my website isnt very glamourous, but im a newbie and i havent had time to get any really good pictures yet =s

Over all it looks great! especially for a free site? awesome!

@IamGinaW I guess I could...but with baking its a whole different ball game, more complicated.... and Im lovin the face painting. did my very 1st gig last weekend, it was very nerve raking but time flew by and I loved every minute of it. One lil girl came back to give me a piece of candy, it was soo sweet! all in all I enjoy face painting more than baking.

@missashly, Thanks for ur feed back...I'll have to go back and make some adjustments. Im also a complete newbie, had my very 1st gig last week! Im learning losts from this site and all the amazing ppl here I know you will too, Good Luck and thanks again for ur feed back

multiple talents - your cakes look fab! Congrats on your site, i like that it's not too cluttered.

and hey congrats on your first gig!!

Thanks so much, Rae