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Post by MelindaT0813 on Mon May 16, 2011 10:20 pm

So I am wanting to advertise Belly Painting as an option on my website but every time I read what I write I end up scrapping it.
It just sounds creepy lol.....
Anyone want to let me peek at your verbage? I won't go word for word without your permission. Laughing

wish I was better ith words Rolling Eyes
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Re: Need some verbage

Post by Guest on Mon May 16, 2011 10:30 pm

See my website... just check out our sites to see what we all put out there.

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Post by MelindaT0813 on Mon May 16, 2011 10:32 pm

I didn't want to "invade" people's sites lol
But now that I have your permission.... don't mind if I do Laughing
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Post by Guest on Mon May 16, 2011 10:54 pm

Um... checking out someone's website isn't "invading" ... it is there for people to look at... to get ideas from sure, to lift and use exactly, not so much! Wink

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Post by Criss on Mon May 16, 2011 11:06 pm

It really depends on the market your hitting?

If you want to come across as very professional, you may live in a very conservative area like I do, you can use terms like; gestational paintings, gestational belly paintings, maternity belly paintings.

If you live in a more liberal area, you can use terms like; belly bump painting, pregnant bellies, bump paintings, belly art....etc.

Hope that helps some??
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Post by AngieAnders on Tue May 17, 2011 12:12 am

I am too lazy to look but I think I have mine termed as "prenatal paintings". I do live in a conservative area where people go "uh, why would anyone do that??" so I mention baby book keepsakes, pregnancy portraits and other things of that nature.
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Post by barefootbutterfly on Tue May 17, 2011 2:34 am

http://www.barefootbutterfly.com/pregnancy-arttummypainting.html


I like to call it Pregnancy Tummy Painting Smile I've never really loved the word 'belly'.. maybe cause I still have a fat one from giving birth 3 times?? lol Smile
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Post by Psalmbook on Tue May 17, 2011 4:24 pm

Prenatal Belly painting, gestational painting, baby bump painting, a way to memorialize your upcoming blessed event, Great for memory books, great for baby showers or for a private photo shoot, I often say the paint will cover any imperfections you may be self conscious about.
I also try to let my photos do the talking for me.
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Post by AngieAnders on Tue May 17, 2011 10:15 pm

barefootbutterfly wrote:http://www.barefootbutterfly.com/pregnancy-arttummypainting.html
I've never really loved the word 'belly'..

I feel the same way. Maybe because we never used that word growing up. We said tummy or stomach. I have always associated the word "belly" with obesity... probably because of the term "beer belly".
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Post by MelindaT0813 on Wed May 18, 2011 12:30 am

Gosh, yeah. I think the "pre-natal" that I kept putting in there made it sound too medical or something...
This is what I have so far, what do you all think?

Maternity Tummy Art
Looking for a way to memorialize your upcoming blessed event?
Have your baby bump turned into a piece of art!
Also known as Belly Painting, it is perfect for memory keepsakes, pregnancy portraits, baby showers or even a private photo shoot

Have stretch marks, scars or other imperfections?
Don't worry! The paint will cover any imperfections you may be self conscious about.

All designs are unique and tailored for each client and pregnancy.

All Paints, Glitter, Gems, and Glue used are professional grade and FDA approved.

There is a discount given if you would like multiple sessions throughout your pregnancy.

Rates are influenced by complexity of design and how far you are from area code 33765.
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Post by AngieAnders on Wed May 18, 2011 9:47 am

Looks great to me!
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Post by rebelsky on Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:37 pm

Change "area code" to "zip code", and you are golden Smile

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Post by barefootbutterfly on Mon Jul 04, 2011 4:37 am

That wording looks great Smile very professional!
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Prenatal Belly Painting

Post by Nicole @ Face-a-Rama on Mon Jul 11, 2011 4:18 pm

I will be using the term Prenatal Belly Painting. That's when I get the chance to do one. lol
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