Sharing my website for your critiquing

Hello lovelies! I would appreciate some constructive criticism on my website. Please remember that I am relatively new, and my designs aren't as totally awesome as some of yours (in fact, many of them came from a book). Let me know what you all think, please and thank you.

http://thefacepaintlady.blogspot.com/

woops i posted this in the wrong section. can one of our wonderful mods move it for me?

Your website looks very professional!
there are some typos, but other than that... AWESOME!

There ARE?!! Are you serious? I went over it 4 times!! Going back to check now. Thank you.

Hello.

I think it looks really nice. I like the section on safety and the photo of the child looking in a mirror.

Good Luck

Evelyn

Thank you Anything you see that could be changed/improved?

Nope.....looks fine to me.

Big smile!
Evelyn

Okay, I must say it's very easy to maneuver around, it's bright, not distracting and very informative and easy to understand. My ONLY problem i found was that you don't say where you're from. If someone from Indiana (like me) found your website, I'd think you were in Syracuse, Indiana. There's no mention of NY anywhere. So, maybe on your home page, you should have all your location and phone info underneath the title on the front page. Other than that, you've got a great page!!! (and if you have your town and state in your title, you'll come up more often in websearches!!!)

photomomma6 wrote:Okay, I must say it's very easy to maneuver around, it's bright, not distracting and very informative and easy to understand. My ONLY problem i found was that you don't say where you're from. If someone from Indiana (like me) found your website, I'd think you were in Syracuse, Indiana. There's no mention of NY anywhere. So, maybe on your home page, you should have all your location and phone info underneath the title on the front page. Other than that, you've got a great page!!! (and if you have your town and state in your title, you'll come up more often in websearches!!!)

ohhh wow good point. I thought I had NY in my profile. Fixing now, THANK YOU very much!!!