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Post by MelodyFPL on Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:00 am

Hello lovelies! I would appreciate some constructive criticism on my website. Please remember that I am relatively new, and my designs aren't as totally awesome as some of yours (in fact, many of them came from a book). Let me know what you all think, please and thank you.

http://thefacepaintlady.blogspot.com/
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Post by MelodyFPL on Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:18 am

woops i posted this in the wrong section. can one of our wonderful mods move it for me?
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Post by Inca on Thu Jul 07, 2011 1:36 pm

Your website looks very professional!
there are some typos, but other than that... AWESOME!
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Post by MelodyFPL on Thu Jul 07, 2011 2:04 pm

There ARE?!! Are you serious? I went over it 4 times!! Going back to check now. Thank you.
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Post by Evelyn on Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:30 pm

Hello.

I think it looks really nice. I like the section on safety and the photo of the child looking in a mirror.

Good Luck

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Post by MelodyFPL on Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:04 am

Thank you Smile Anything you see that could be changed/improved?
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Post by Evelyn on Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:39 am

Nope.....looks fine to me.

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Post by photomomma6 on Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:11 pm

Okay, I must say it's very easy to maneuver around, it's bright, not distracting and very informative and easy to understand. My ONLY problem i found was that you don't say where you're from. If someone from Indiana (like me) found your website, I'd think you were in Syracuse, Indiana. There's no mention of NY anywhere. So, maybe on your home page, you should have all your location and phone info underneath the title on the front page. Other than that, you've got a great page!!! (and if you have your town and state in your title, you'll come up more often in websearches!!!)
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Post by MelodyFPL on Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:37 pm

photomomma6 wrote:Okay, I must say it's very easy to maneuver around, it's bright, not distracting and very informative and easy to understand. My ONLY problem i found was that you don't say where you're from. If someone from Indiana (like me) found your website, I'd think you were in Syracuse, Indiana. There's no mention of NY anywhere. So, maybe on your home page, you should have all your location and phone info underneath the title on the front page. Other than that, you've got a great page!!! (and if you have your town and state in your title, you'll come up more often in websearches!!!)
ohhh wow good point. I thought I had NY in my profile. Fixing now, THANK YOU very much!!!
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