One more sight to check out please??

Can you guys check out my new sight?? I know that the grammar and sentence structure needs alot of work, I still need to have a few people proof read it for me. But any advice you have will be much appreciated. I also am going to have better pics to put on the page, these are just older fillers until I get some new ones uploaded.

www.cincinnatifacepainters.com

I think its cute and I like the neon touches against the black. Also the words are pretty clear to read which is important.

Its very easy to read and to navigate and its fun to look at! It took a while to load, but that could be on my computer's end:)

Also wix tends to have glitches every now and then. But it is clear to read and easy to navigate which is all you need.

I like your site.
I noticed some things, but I'm not sure about my own English spelling/typo's. Hope you don't mind that I point them out for you to check (you asked for it haha):

On the homepage: unforgetable -> unforgettable
On the packages and prices: guest -> guests
On the packages and prices: accomadate -> accommodate
On the Questions and answers page there is a Q and A in front of the text of the first answer. I don't think they belong there.

Hope you don't feel offended

I love the colors.... they really pop.

I agree with Nancy with the Q & A page. I think the 2nd and 3rd Q & A's should be bullets instead using the "Q)" & 'A)" symbols.

awesome job!

I like the look of it... once you get the proofreading done, it should be great. I really like the topics you addressed in your Q&A.

No offense taken at all Nancy. My husband corrected my grammar for years, then gave up Thank God. It's not my thing, not so good at the spelling either. I will make all of those corrections. THank you all for taking the time to help me out.

I LOVE it, Eva! The colors are gorgeously cheerful and everything is so bright and easy to navigate. Beautiful job! Love the pics of your work and esp. with the children's hospital setting!