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Post by VictoriaS on 1/3/2012, 12:22 pm

Good day!

I'm trying to solidify my logo. I would like feedback on the design. Comments are appreciated Smile


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Re: Feedback on logo needed

Post by rharris524 on 1/3/2012, 12:31 pm

I'm no expert, but I think I'd like some color. Also, maybe make the the tail of the 'g' longer so it acts as the smile to complete your face. I do really like you font choice

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Post by rharris524 on 1/3/2012, 12:32 pm

And I like the white on black better, stands out more

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Re: Feedback on logo needed

Post by Denise Cold on 1/3/2012, 12:44 pm

I like it, like the font. I've attached an image with the grins warped into a smile but I've not done a very good job of it but thought it would be cute if someone could use illustrator or something to do a better job.

Is there a reason for the "for Parties and Events" in the actual logo? I would save that for ads or website.

I think you've got a nice bold start.

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Re: Feedback on logo needed

Post by VictoriaS on 1/3/2012, 1:57 pm

I appreciate the feedback. I had the g act more like a mouth and others didn't like it. Maybe it was executed poorly. See here:
It was suggested to me to not to force the idea of the smiling face... make it a bit more subtle.

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Post by debranewmanart on 1/3/2012, 1:59 pm

I think having "facepainting and body art" on there is essential. "Big Grins" by itself would never make me think it had anything to do with face painting. I might think dentistry or toothpaste though.

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Post by Metina on 1/3/2012, 3:48 pm

What if you shorten the "i" and put its dot back and then shorten the tail on the "g" just a bit. I like the face look, very clever.

I like the white on black. Very bold!

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Post by VictoriaS on 1/3/2012, 4:07 pm

Metina wrote:What if you shorten the "i" and put its dot back and then shorten the tail on the "g" just a bit. I like the face look, very clever.

I like the white on black. Very bold!


Do you mean on the first one I posted? The first one is closer to the finished one.

I've been creating a smilie to go with it, but I don't know if it is too much.
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Re: Feedback on logo needed

Post by VictoriaS on 1/3/2012, 10:41 pm

Based on some suggestions from others... I have new versions.


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Post by rharris524 on 1/3/2012, 11:21 pm

Oooh, I like the first one (#3) best followed by the third one (#1)

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Re: Feedback on logo needed

Post by Denise Cold on 1/4/2012, 12:32 am

I know you're going to hate me; but, I think you're heading in the wrong direction...because the "grin" is with the big and not grin itself. Here's maybe a way to make the g's the grins without messing with the font? I'd rather see it clean than go too far with the cute.


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