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"Training" page on our website - please review & critique

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"Training" page on our website - please review & critique

Post by Fabtastic on Fri Jan 20, 2012 2:44 pm

I recently finished writing up a page for our website that talks about the training we have done to get where we are right now. I have uploaded it but have not yet made a link to it from the rest of my page so it's not really available unless you have the direct link. Would you guys mind taking a look and telling me what you think of it?


I have a couple of reasons for doing a page like this, and one of them is to be able to get the point across that we have invested a lot of time and money in this business. I want people to know that we are serious about this, and we didn't just pick up a paintbrush last week and call ourselves a business.

Also, I wanted a reason to post that cool picture of Amanda after she was painted at the Wolfe brothers workshop. Razz

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Post by squiggle on Fri Jan 20, 2012 4:33 pm

Looks great, Isabelle! I love the pics with the Wolfe brothers!

I have a similar page on my site as well (but no pics with international stars boo-hoo! Smile

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Post by MasterpieceFacePainting on Fri Jan 20, 2012 6:24 pm

I think it's great, and I am in absolute awe of the Wolfe brothers work! And his tshirt... It's brilliant!

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Post by rthling on Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:52 pm

I LIKE it!

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Post by Geekophile on Sat Jan 21, 2012 10:28 pm

This page is a great idea. I desperately need to revise my own site, but I just hate doing it. Ugh. Anyway, I'm on my second beer, so maybe not the best proofreader right now, but in the last paragraph there are some phrases I would revise.

"and to continue to expand and improve ourselves. (you might not want to expand yourself- that just happens naturally with all the birthday cake we are offered!) We love the reaction people have when they see themselves transformed, and the better we get at our art, the more amazing the transformation will be! For an example of an amazing transformation, see the bottom pictures below! ( bottom/below is redundant) This is what inspires us."


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